Reviews for Twisted Game
sealednectar chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
I really liked this.

The words you chose were perfect, 'orchestrated' and 'fillet' are memorable.


Insomniac-in-green chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
that is awesome! :o

really really emotional and meaningful.

loved it

BedHead-RedHead chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
so deliciously colourful, but painful too. i luv the lines "slashing each other with double-edged fillet each other's hearts". that's so graphic without going to the extremes, but it still paints a picture. love the concept of the internal battle. great job! :)
listen to what i've never said chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
I absolutely loved the last four lines :)

missed your work