Reviews for Among the Stars
Ajescent chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
Only real problem I have with this are the lines

Searching for Knowledge

Looking for Knowledge

Searching and looking are the same thing and the fact that you use "knowledge" twice makes the second line obsolete. Maybe find another word for "Knowledge" to fit on the second line.

You try something similar later on in

Our Lost Brothers

Our Missing sisters

I think this works better than the first example as it's similar but different unlike the first example which just comes across as repetition.

Otherwise, not bad.