Reviews for Sorry
Ebrethiel chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
Line eight: "I'll see you on the other side,"

To me, it sounds extremely vague and conjures up many different ideas as to what you intend it to mean.

If you hadn't written about the suicide note in the summary, I wouldn't have known what it was about. So, I think you should have mentioned something about death or loss, even in-directly. Because I can't seem to find anything in the poem indicating something like that.

Third line: "I took the cowards way out."

If I'm not mistaken, "cowards" should be "coward's" - with an apostrophe.

Other than that, it was a nice poem; mildly interesting.
Eternal Note chapter 1 . 2/26/2010