|Reviews for Stay|
| Ebrethiel chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
I've reviewed many stories and poems and this is the second one I've favourited. Enough said.
One minor bad thing though ... "I don't think I'll see him again" almost sounds as though the protagonist is shoving him away. It doesn't match the really emotional lines prior to it.
Excellent work! Keep writing.
| Eternal Note chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
i love it
| Lightning And Blossoms Eye chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
Ok... not bad... better... Cool I think.
| anonymous fear chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
This kinda makes me wanna cry. I'm not sure why...I guess I feel a lot of emotion behind your words.
It's good, keep writing