I've reviewed many stories and poems and this is the second one I've favourited. Enough said.

Go you.

One minor bad thing though ... "I don't think I'll see him again" almost sounds as though the protagonist is shoving him away. It doesn't match the really emotional lines prior to it.

Excellent work! Keep writing.

i love it

Ok... not bad... better... Cool I think.

This kinda makes me wanna cry. I'm not sure why...I guess I feel a lot of emotion behind your words.

It's good, keep writing