please tell me she did not forgive him just like that!?

this was great. really well-written, and it's amazing how the ending came together. :)

If he knew she was gonna come over, then why'd he cheat on her? And for how long has it been going on? No wonder he was so "patient" with her...

Anyway, if this isn't a one-shot please update soon :)

What a fucking asshole, like seriously? Who has sex with someone else when youve been in a commmited relationship for two fucking years? Like that's just rude.

*tears* So sad! I thought this was going to be a smut fic but no! Poor Eva! What a jerk boyfriend! Ugh! This was really well-written, by the way. You captured the emotion of the characters really well. D

I'm imagining a loud thwack and a black eye appearing the next morning.

I'm sure alot of people would have said this 'you had me fooled' but seriously you did have me fooled. I, for one thought this would be some cheesy romance but for the life of me i did not guess it would end like this.

What a fucktard, i'm surprised she didn't castrate the bloody bastard, or did she? you did leave a bit of cliff hanger at the end, so anything could have happened, she could have forgiven him (hopefully not) or she could have kicked his 'precious' jewel (if so, WOOO! WOMEN POWER lol)

Honestly what did happen at the end? i really wanna know, you should consider making a sequel to this, maybe give us an insight to Zacks thought? although i guess whatever he says and does won't make us hate him any less ..

I mean OMG, he actually said that 'it's okay' like WTF and what was it? 'i didn't want to pressure you'

So what, he goes and fucks another girl? What a freak!

Poor Eva, she actually though he was the 'one' didn't she?

Great story, although it was very upsetting :(

Damn. Zach, your horrible piece of shit.

LOL, just saying. xD Poor Eva.

Where is the rest? You are awesomeness at the keyboard/pen thing! :). You have a new fan! Nanananana! Ep! Hehe. Ms. Writer ma'am, please may I have some more? :D

woow! Hmm...i was SO not expecting THAT! Stupid Zach! *hmph*

Aw. The poor girl. That's just terrible.

:(

Men.

i think u expressed the emotions through the characters very well.

i just wish u make a longer version of this has great potential. pretty pls?

zach is such an !god, i wish she at least slap , sorry, that's my inner feminist talking.

but seriously, how dare he said he loved her after he admitted having sex with someone else?like i said, !

So sad... I just wanna kick that guy where the sun don't shine! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl

They're all SO GOOD.