Reviews for OAO
Humb1eBeginnings chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
Nice... I have to agree with you though. Time is defintely above us. But when over and out comes, depending on the choices you made in life, we are above it. So with time we should do all we can to do and live right. That's how you accomplished getting over time. Awesome poem.
nickyO chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
Lots of thought packed into a few lines. Interesting.
sealednectar chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
Hmm, this haiku really makes me think. I liked the personification of time here. I think this haiku is about the mortality of life- how time has control over us. If so, time is definitely standing above us, but we should get as much out of life as we can before it's 'over and out'. Good work.
Mirabella chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
Awesome lines! :)