Reviews for Castaway
iAmTheTot chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
I like this. In particular, I had no problem imagining the scenario. I could see myself in this situation with every line, a new detail added. Very cool stuff. My only gripe is that I feel the rhythm on the line "Although I'm restless, I try to lie still" runs a little bit too long. Before and after that line, I read the poem very smoothly.
Night Liker chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
All the small details in the beginning allow a glimpse into the castaway's world and make it seem very authentic.

I love the way it ends. So very uncertain (as I think it should be)

Thanks for sharing

~N. Liker
Kriss-C chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
This one was really good... I don't have your email address to write you...
Written In Stone chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
a perfect description of being an actual castaway. i love it!