|Reviews for Transparency|
| scarlitangel chapter 8 . 6/23/2010
...That was a freaking creepy chapter. I could see the little girl getting possessed. x.x
I hope the bad demon guy isn't Leon. :'[
| Bookits chapter 7 . 3/5/2010
Whoa, that was scary. Demons, do not sound nice. This is way awesome, please write more soon!
| Bookits chapter 4 . 3/5/2010
Sounds interesting, I like it lots so far!
| Bookits chapter 3 . 3/5/2010
What the duckies? Why did Ana go along with that?
| Bookits chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
This sounds way cool! I am also a Fanfiction writer and reader.
| scarlitangel chapter 6 . 3/5/2010
DEMONS! YAY! O_O Sorry. I thought that was cool so I got really excited.
I'm in love with this story. Every time I read it, I just want more and more. You're fantastic at writing such a crazy, amazing story. WRITE AND COME OUT WITH MORE NOW, WOMAN. O.O
| BridgettaValentine chapter 5 . 2/24/2010
I like Elijah! I feel bad for him. I don't trust the evil owner. He's mean and Blade didn't deserve thst at ALL! I'm super mad now! The story is getting more and more interesting and I miss Leon. Grammar and spelling is good which is always nice, just remember where to put your commas. :D Can't wait for more and is Elijah skitzophrenic [sp?].
| Emily Rose 514 chapter 5 . 2/13/2010
Nice chapter XD
Post more XD
I want Leon to come in soon. I miss Blade already...[
| scarlitangel chapter 5 . 2/9/2010
...Oh. My. God. Raine is strange. I don't like him. Don't trust him.
POOR BLADE. :'(
o, I wonder what's going to happen to Eli with her special powerz? :D lolz!
| scarlitangel chapter 4 . 2/1/2010
I LOVE IT, KRYSTA. Blade is so awesome!
I wonder what he would say about my hands. o.o
It's weird... I totally... get that part, when he was looking at her hands. It's so awesome; it's my favorite part!
Keep up the awesome work!
I demand to know more about the evil spirits. :3
| Emily Rose 514 chapter 4 . 1/31/2010
I liked this chapter. You were right; I love Blade. He's awesome. I feel bad for her that she had to go to an insane asylum, but if she didn't maybe then she wouldn't have met Blade.
Post the next chapter soon. XD
| BridgettaValentine chapter 4 . 1/31/2010
Alright, review time! For one of my three favorite authors [Skittles, My daughter, and Twin!].
The idea...is just mindboggling. No idea how you came up with it but i LOVE it. It's got just so many cool ideas. Already I'm craving for more. What does Nyguyen mean? Or is it just a random word? I love the detail, but I'd like to know a little more about the goasts. I'm having a hard time picturing them. OMG, what her friend did was mean, I wonder if her friend always thought Eli to be crazy. The mother shouldn't have sent her away without checking into it first, that was a horrible thing to do, I'm officially not talking to her because I am mad at her. The characters are so lovable and I miss Leon already, though Blade is awesome. He has the same view on me with the hands! I believe hands are the windows to souls too!
Well I can hardly wait for more so keep it coming!
| Emily Rose 514 chapter 3 . 1/31/2010
Poor Eli! (
I said her mom wasn't to be trusted, didn't I? I called it.
Leon sounded absolutely heartbroken.
You know what I like about this? I can hear your voice in this and I think that's really cool how you did that.
Nice chapter. Post more XD
| scarlitangel chapter 2 . 1/31/2010
Love it, Krysta! The Mom SCARES THE CRAP OUT OF ME. *dies*
| Emily Rose 514 chapter 2 . 1/31/2010
I'm gonna try to review every step of the way. So you feel special. :D
Gr...*stabs the mom* I don't trust her...:(
I order you to.
I love Leon, he's awesome, but he creeps me out a little...[