|Reviews for Transparency|
| Emily Rose 514 chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
Hey Krysta! XD
From your bestest friend, Emily. LoLz, jk.
It had a good flow and it was short. b You have to pack a lot of description into a chapter if you're going to make it short. It's all about word choice, 'cause otherwise the reader loses interest. Just saying that if all your chapters are short. :D