Reviews for Transparency
Emily Rose 514 chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
Hey Krysta! XD

Good chapter.

Nice username.

Post more.

From your bestest friend, Emily. LoLz, jk.

It had a good flow and it was short. b You have to pack a lot of description into a chapter if you're going to make it short. It's all about word choice, 'cause otherwise the reader loses interest. Just saying that if all your chapters are short. :D
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