Reviews for The Eternal Divinity Part 2: Axis of Power
ObsceneFreak chapter 18 . 11/29/2012
Seriously I can't wait to read the rest both parts of your story are awesome other then a few spelling errors and some grammar mistakes you have nothing to worry about. And seriously it's about time kade an talia did the deed lol
Much love
-Freak-
simplycomplicated3263 chapter 18 . 11/28/2012
please please please tell me you are going to finish this story!
Blueyes57 chapter 18 . 8/20/2012
I'm disappointed that this one is still sitting. I've enjoyed the whole thing. I like how you are descriptive but don't use so many words that it turns into a word vomit lol I can see the pictures in my head. You really have a story here. I'll put a flag on it in case you ever come back to it but since it's been over a year I don't have any hope that you will.
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 18 . 5/4/2012
AMAZING STORY! Will it be finished?

I just wanted to point out a few things as usual.

I understand why the book started kind of abruptly, but it might be better if there was another chapter at the beginning to start it.

I noticed it jumped around a lot... they seemed to spend more time on missions than at bass.

For the people who died, you may want to add some more depth to their characters so that readers will be more emotional and stuff...

There was a girl, the one who brought Talia to the camp in the beginning, but her name escapes me at the moment... Anyways, I like how you kind of developed her character.

Keep up the great work!

Tarah xXx
Heydollface14 chapter 18 . 11/24/2011
So I absolutely love your story, they are amazing! Please update some time soon, you that would be great! Happy Thanksgiving btw!
Cecily Mitchell chapter 18 . 6/28/2011
So I recently found this story thanks to a suggestion from another FP author and I gotta say that I'm very happy she chose to share it. It was awesome to see Talia grow and change and I look forward to seeing her step into her position and grow into the person she was meant to be. I really hope to see some reconciliation between her and Gracia but I kinda get if that's not going to be possible. Kade would make an awesome king btw. And the cliffie is just awesome :)
Llyly chapter 18 . 5/2/2011
First, may I say that I absolutely love this series you have created. I cannot image how much time you spent simply trying to make all the pieces fit together. Your characters are tons of fun to read about, and the plot is both riveting and amusing at once. I particularly enjoy watching Talia and Kade go back and forth much of the time.

Second, I really, really, really dislike Joan with the fiery passion of a thousand white hot suns. She is really an annoying bitch. Plus, why Thatch? He was too cute. Personally, I think it would be interesting to see if/how you develop Paulette more as a character. Right now, she's just the stuck up girl who excels at everything, and is seen as the protagonists small time rival -though not in love.

In recap: great story, believable characters, and you really just want to give them all hugs most of the time. Either way, I loved the story, and I hope you continue to write it.

PS: Kade and Talia should get married. ;)
positively.optimistic chapter 18 . 4/27/2011
O! I may possibly be just a tiny itty bitty bit in love with this story (and part one too). And just in case others have not mentioned this yet, though they would have to be completely off thier faces not to have, this story, and you, are awesome. Just sayin'. You know, makin' sure you knew.

Yup! okay...

THIS IS THE FRICKEN AWESOMEST STORY AND I LOVE IT AND YES!

now im done. thank you, i will come again. (hint hint, next time you update, hint hint)
lxgirl017 chapter 18 . 3/13/2011
talk about a plot twist
charliej chapter 18 . 3/9/2011
I'm glad you're writing again. It felt a bit choppy but I think you're probably just trying to move things along for the next big chapter, right?

So Talia is queen. Is Kade considered her consort? Will he be sent back to the school or whatever its' called or will he be allowed to hang with her now?

Can't wait for more
Midnight113 chapter 18 . 3/9/2011
Ooh, interesting. I'm excited for her now with this new position of queen and I'm anxious to see what comes of it. Love her and Kade too, thanks for updating. More please!
pbgurl chapter 18 . 3/8/2011
YAY! Update! I missed this story. :)

And Yay to Talia being the head of Divinity!

Another Yay to Talia and Kade being together!

So how many paradox pieces does Divinity have now?

-Liz :D
XtremeAngell chapter 17 . 3/2/2011
Awesome story!

Great plot and characters!

Finally it seems their relationship is stable woohoo!

Wow Talia is going to become leader I hope she can handle the responsibility.

Can't wait for the next update!
Ellx chapter 17 . 2/22/2011
this is really great i cannot wait until u write more x
Kirhava chapter 17 . 10/17/2010
Only 5 more chapters? I don't want this story to end!

I love Kade and Talia together. They're so sweet! And Frank was great, too.

Also, don't worry about the delayed updates. We all know that there is a live out there, aside from FictionPress.

Until the next time!
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