Reviews for Gavin's Story
Silent-fart chapter 12 . 2/1
Now I want a back story of collinpoor unwanted child with v v weird kinks
Iamnotyoursenpai chapter 12 . 1/30
IM CRYINGHGHHGGGGGGG I CANT BREATHE OMG JUST THE FIRST SENTENCE I TRYING NOT TO SCREAM OMF i need to calm the fuck down... Best chapter overall... oh Collin... youre.. so... GAY like omfg i was dying kinda wanted him to fuck Gavin frs but the thigh fucking was still hawt AND GAVIN MOANING BRECKEN WAS HAWT TOO IDK WHY AND THEN COLLIN GETTING JEALOUS OH MY LOOOOORD I HAD THEE ULTIMATE ORGASM KINDA SHIP IT BUT STILL SHIP GAVIN AND BRECKEN AND COLLIN AND LEVI BUT STILL AGDHDKFK im just crying and trying to remember how to breathe again... YOU NEED TO DO LIKE A LITTLE STORY OF THE FOUR OF THEM IN THE FUTURE THEY BETTER STILL BE FRIENDS... OMFG A FOURSOME I WOULD GO CRAZY I SWEAR OF GOD JUST GETTING TURNED ON FROM THE IDEA ANYWAYS THIS WAS SO GOOD AND INFORMING AND AMAZING I FRICKIN LOVE YOU CALICO SENPAI DONT FORGET ME CUZ ILL NEVER FORGET YOUR AMAZING WORKS JUST OMFG I DONT ITS JUST ALL SO AMAZING YOURE AMAZING AND YOUR WRITING I JUST LOVE YOU ¡-¡ AND ILL KEEP READING MORE OF YOUR WORK SO PLEASE NOTIFY ME WHEN YOURE WRITING SOMETHING KNEW CUZ ILL FALL OUT OF MY BED SREACHING FOR IT but yea ill stop now ily and yea baiiii for now\·/
Iamnotyoursenpai chapter 11 . 1/30
THIS CHAPTER IS JUST AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH OML I DO MISS BRECKEN BUT AFDFJKFOGK PENNY WHITBY GOTTA BE A CONNECTION WITH THE UNDRESSING OF TRAVIS WHITBY PRETTY SURE ONE OF HIS SITERS OH LORD I WOULD HAVE A HEART ATTACK IF HIM AND KODY SHOWED UP BUT ANYWAYS AGHDJFOD RYAN OH GOD YES I JUST WANTED GAVIN TO DO IT JUST PUSH HIM DOWN OR SUCK HIS DICK YOU'RE SUCH A TEASE SENPAI PLEASE I WANT ANOTHER PERSON I MEAN YEA THE COLLIN AND GAVIN SCENES ARE HOT BUT I WANNA SEE MORE SLUTTY GAVIN AND OMFG I SCREAMED WHEN GAVIN WAS THINKING OF SAYING HE WAS A SLUT AGDHJFIF YEA BOIIIIIIIIIII ANYWAYS ILY KEEP WRITING SENPAI AND YOU WILL FOREVER BE MY FAVORITE AUTHOR
Iamnotyoursenpai chapter 10 . 1/30
I just love Nick now more than ever knowing what he thinks of Gavin and all its amazing this chapter just answered a lot in power trip for me THANK YOU
Iamnotyoursenpai chapter 7 . 1/29
OMLLLLORDYYYYYYYYYY THAT THREESOME DREAM AHDHFHAHDJDKKFK OMFG THAT SOUNDED SO HAWTTTTAAA LIKE GOD I WISH THAT HAPPENED LIKE I MEAN HE DIDNT GET RAPED AND ALL oh my god i forgot to review the rape chapter it was so sad i really cried it was like i was there i really wanted to beat the fuck out of those guys but it was good and this chapter too sooooo good ily senpai
A.J chapter 11 . 1/28
Ahh I absolutly love Brand New, wow that was cool how you used that song.. love that song. love your stories so much..
Iamnotyoursenpai chapter 5 . 1/28
OH YEA BTW IT TWENTYTWOAIRPLANES FROM WATTPAD I HAVE A REALLY SMUTTY BACKGROUND AND AN ANGRY SHREK AS MY PROFILE BUT YEA LIKE IM READING ALL YOUR WORKS AND PLEASE UPDATE ESPECIALLY BRUTAL BROTHER AND THE UNDRESSING OF TRAVIS WHITBY I CRUIIIIIIII PLEASE CALICO I FRICKIN LOVE IM REALLY SCREAMING THIS ALL IN MY HEAD ANYWAYS I GOTTA GET BACK TO READING CUZ ITS JUST SPIIIIIICCCYYYYYY
Iamnotyoursenpai chapter 4 . 1/28
Fucking amazing just everything already read power trip and fuck buddies so its just so fun seeing hiw collin and gavin were back then and WHAT THEY DID HERE OMFG I LAUGHED SO MANY TIMES HOW COLLIN TOLD HIM STUFF AND GAVINS REACTIONS I JUST LOVED IT ALL I LOVE YOU CALICO YOU ARE MY FAVORITE WRITER OF ALL TIME LIKE YOURE PAST JOHN GREEN RIGHT I JUST LOVE YOUR WORK NOTICE ME SENPAIIII
Guest chapter 7 . 1/13
It's darth Vader form wattpad, I love you
Guest chapter 12 . 12/21/2016
I'm not good with words (not my native language etc.) so I'm sorry if I express some things in a weird way _
But I just wanted to say how much I love ur style of writing. Really.
It's so fcking good. Like the way u mix smut with some actual content and all. (The smut itself is also super hot after all.)
But this story, it makes me so incredibly sad. Or just this whole complex, idk how to say
Maybe it's becauseI have read F-buddies first, then Powertrip and now this but idk. (So this review is a little for all of These stories - originally, I knew them from Wattpad bzw. .)
First of all I'm sorry for Gavin, he had to endure so much. And to be honest I don't like him to play around and kinda fall for other ppl so much. Cuz he belongs to Breckon (Breckan?). Perhaps I'm just too much into his perspective _ idk it hurts.
But, after reading f-buddies I'm also sorry for Collin. Mostly for him actually. I mean he got happy in the end. But you can just feel that his feelings are actually very vulnerable and stuff. Just knowing, how much he likes Gavin while his best friend is just being a jerk to Gavin and also him, it sux. It sux so much. How he has to secretly suffer. (Sounds very melodramatic, ik .-.) And it sucks to know that their friendship has probably just ended. Really. That's what's disturbing me the most. I mean sure that's life and all. But since my own graduation is coming up soon, this topic gets me very emotional. Really. Idk but this fact, how Collin's, Breckon's and Gavin's relationship developed (so the whole I-secretly-am-in-love-with-your-now-bf thing but also how they Aren't friends anymore - just the whole thing) is so sad. Awful.
Anyways I also miss Breckon so much T.T he needs to be with Gavin. Idk I just need Gavin's love for Breckon only to be confirmed. ...I'm so addicted to happy endings, it's almost painful.
_ sorry for wailing so much. Just needed it to get off my chest.
Still love ur way of telling this Story/or stories in general and I'm looking forward to read any new chapters or just all other stuff from u ~
Suhara chapter 12 . 8/8/2016
Loved it, and this prequel made me love Nick so much and just about stand Collin (okay thats a lie i love him too

So is this the end?
BuryMEINSIN chapter 12 . 8/3/2016
Ok, after reading every Collin chapter in this side story I've got to say I'm so shipping them together! Like I'm so much Collin/Gavin trash and I regret nothing. Team Collin FTW LMAO. They just have this very interesting dynamic... and we don't get so much of Colling in Power Trip so this is like the first time we get more insight on Collin and I love his character so much, his assholiness and his obvious pining for Gavin. That made me feel kinda sad, he's so into him and I'd pay anything to get a glimpse of his thoughts when finally Brecken and Gavin got together. Omg I would really love you for the rest of my life if you could make like a sort of AU for Power Trip where Gavin ends up with Collin instead of Brecken 3 Anyway keep up the good work, I'm a fan of every single one of your stories :B
Jessica Hunter chapter 12 . 6/6/2016
Hello,

So far I like Gavin's side! I like that he's honest, laid back, can take a joke. Nick New is actually a decent guy. I thought maybe he was a little bit of a douche in Power Trip, but there were no scenes to back it up. Does Brecken reallly steal Nick News GF's or are they just big whores that want dick where they can find it? lol. Collin is a douche but at the same time he wants love to. Its cute that he has a crush on Gavin, but doesn't go all the way to 'steal' Gavin form Brecken.

Awesome job! I notice that its not Complete yet. Are you still writing for this story?!
YaoiLover chapter 7 . 4/19/2016
Finally someone is treating Gavin right! I hope he eventually gets a self esteem and NIck doesn't screw things up further, which I have a feeling he might.
JBFanatic chapter 12 . 2/29/2016
SO...I'm in love with this story, just as much as I am with Power Trip. I can't wait for you to continue it.

I always wondered why Gavin was the way he was, just what happened in his past even besides the rape, and now I'm getting it. He has so much going on inside, I love it. I love him, 100 percent. For him to have such a blank mask and the ability to breeze by completely unnoticed, there's also something about him that could cause anyone he meets to become really drawn in and attached. Case in point, I want to be his best friend. No lie lol.

In Power Trip, I thought a lot of people were quite douchebaggy, but in this story, a lot of that is changing. For example, I absolutely love Nick. He's so sweet and a chatterbox; it's really endearing. And Madden, I can't get enough. So, he has issues, but who doesn't? He's crazy protective with serious anger management issues but it's hilarious at times and I love it. I'm even enjoying Collin, especially after this chapter. He exemplifies my point about being drawn in by Gavin. And he totally loves him, go figure. And "Ponytail" is Nick's brother! lol I always wondered what his deal was. He's cool too lol

I don't know why I waited so long to read this. Now I can't get enough.
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