Adonis is funny and fun. Interesting take on the structure. I think I like the episodic angle. I wonder, however, will there be a longer arc over the course of a volume or something similar in addition to the problem/villain of the week?

they are so adorable together! :D i was on vacation so i had to wait to see this D: but anywayy, your amazing and please update soon!

Well that was a bit less traumatic than I was expecting but I suppose Heenan might not think so. I'm sure they'll manage to get in some mischief in Alpha sector anyhow. Adonis does seem rather possessive. It was neat to see the shoe on the other foot, so to speak.

Thanks for writing!

jess

you're an awesome writer! :D and i have a question, when will the romance begin? as in, romantic feelings?

You've got such a delightfully creative mind when it comes to some of the things those two get up to! That restaurant scene was just awesome. And I can only imagine what else Adonis has in store for Heenan. He's insatiable!

I am quite relieved that Adonis has a legitimate ID now, although I doubt that will be the end to the trouble he finds himself in. He seems particularly prone to such things. I'm curious to see what your Alpha Sector is like. The outer worlds of your universe are quite colorful and I'm looking forward to seeing how they differ from the central ones.

I'll be eagerly awaiting the next bit!

Your overly curious fangirl,

jess

omg i love this story! :D

heenan and adonis have the most amusing banter, its like they ooze "IM THE ONE FOR YOU" all over! plus the action is cool without being too lengthy or full of depth that makes my head hurt. this is one of those stories i can just read happily and let myself enjoy. please continue to update this! :)

Well now, that could cause some interesting trouble further down the track. It's never good to alienate the corporate bigwigs. It's good to see that Adonis is learning a bit more about the ship and the business. The boy still seems pretty naive though, but that's part of his charm. A delight to read, as always.

Thanks for writing!

Your fangirl,

jess

I've just finished reading all your stories here and have enjoyed them very much. I particularly loved your fantasy stories, but this scifi serial is cute so far.

Sorry I did not comment on each story... I was too eager to move on to the next.

I look forward to whatever you post in the future. I particularly hope to see more from Bright Isle.

gah, i wish i could write as well as you! the sex was really hot, and i look forward to more ;D

also, adonis is SO awesome! he can do all these different things, and it makes me laugh how much he likes sex. and heenan is just adorable too! i really like this couple. hopefully youll have another chapter out by next week? im gonna cross my fingers! and i like the thing with adonis's serial number. its all special and lovely, i really adore it. :D

Oh clever, clever lad! Adonis is full of surprises! I wonder what other useful things he knows. Well, besides the obvious. ;) As always, this bit was delightfully hot and ever so much fun to read. I look forward to seeing what else these two get up to, as well as seeing more of their world.

Thank you for writing!

Your snowed-in fangirl,

Jess

omg this is my new fave story! i heart adonis and his sexual cravings, and heenans back handed kindness :D also its cool how adonis is from some ewanky company! update purrontoo, i want to see their life as partners and lots of romancing and pr0n pretty please! o

Episodic huh? That's exciting! Stories without ends are the best kinds!

So now Adonis is legit and a partner; that's going to be fun. I wonder what delightful new skills he will learn along the way. I just hope he doesn't wear out poor Heenan. It sounds like the captain is going to have to do his best to keep his new partner distracted by work outside the bedroom just so he can get some rest. I look forward to seeing what new sort of trouble you'll get them in next.

Thanks for writing! This is definitely one of my new favorites!

Your enthusiastic fangirl,

jess

wow, that was hot :D

i love this already, so please dont abandon it :'(

i cant wait to see how heenan and adonis interact on the ship! theres not many good sci fi stories out there, im glad u made one :]

Yay! More original fic from Momsdarksecret to pounce on! I'm very curious about the setting of this one. Sci-Fi is definitely one of my favorites, and I'm already rather fond of both the Captain and his unexpected passenger. I'm sure they'll get into some kind of delightful trouble involving lots of steamy naughtiness soon enough. ;) I can't wait!

Thank you for writing! Your work is always a delight to read.

Your exuberant fangirl,

jess