|Reviews for Blue?|
| WiltingBlackRose chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
I love it! It has amazing rhythm. And the last line was perfect. Good job!
P.S. Sorry it took me so long to read your poems.
| Jason Daniels chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
this seems odd coming from me, but this is a little too vauge for my taste. what tragedys? kind of want to know more about this situation. everyone knows about the 5 question categories who what when where why and how, but few people know really how to use them. in this case why should i care about these so called tragedys? whats so importaint about them? when did they happen and where, and most importaintly how did they effect you. as an artistic peice this is only half done, keep in mind that its not bad it just needs some touch up. i like being vauge but the imagery has to be there otherwise its just angst.
all in all good peice, sorry about the rant
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