awwww really cute and does kinda show the transition from little kid to well grown up really well

This was touching. I like how the person still likes thinking that the guy counted the stars.
I love the star analogy - how permanent stars are boring and shooting stars are cool. It's sort of like how things that are real are stupid and things that are superficial are awesome. Which is untrue. Completely untrue.
You seem to have put a lot of thought into this piece. Wonderful work and epic effort (haha, amazing alliterations alert!)
Keep writing!

AW!

how adorable!

LOVE THIS!