Reviews for this is not the end of an era |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... So beautiful, I especially like the first and last lines. So amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again, I love the last few lines, "either she's soo genuine she does'nt want to crush me,n it be her own action, cos she understands her tendancies,n thinks it would be the end of me, when it could only be the start,if she truely understood my heart." I LOVE that. It's such a true thing, too, that people won't take chances because they're afraid of hurting others, when if those chances are taken beautiful things fall together. It's an extremely deep thing to say with only four lines, but you said it perfectly. Once, again, I love this poem, and I think you're a pretty incredible author yourself :) -B |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really something. Really like the slow dance with the devil part. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow...that was really deep, i can definitely relate, the line "sick of driving round bends that lead to the same old dead ends" hits home...I feel like that all the time. Greatly put! |