|Reviews for Disowned|
| William Kayspear chapter 2 . 1/2/2013
I laughed my butt off! Lando? You've taken a liking to that name. All in all it was good and I hope to read more!
| yourfuturequeen chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Interesting first start! I will say perhaps you should have a beta read your work (found a few grammatical and punctuational errors). Also, I'm big on historical accuracy, but I still love imagination and creativity, so I like the made-up names. Just keep it authentic, and it's all good! Can't wait to read the next chapter!