Reviews for Wonderland
4tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
I think it's great. everything okay?
I resemble addiction chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
I actually really enjoy the last bit, and do not think it sounds forced at all :)

Stylistically, I really enjoy the first stanza; you make it sound kind of broken, urgent, and that fits in very well with the theme.