Reviews for Breaking the Rule |
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![]() ![]() ![]() E, i lovee this story :3 It's so cuute(: pleasee updatee soon! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok so i just read all four chapters and I'm really enjoying this. But it seems to be moving fast, but not in a bad way. More like Ray's overwhelmed with really intense emotions. Or at least that's how I see it. I can't wait for an update! ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() like the story update soon please |
![]() ![]() ![]() :O So you're going to leave me hanging. I see. Loving it so far :) Your dialog is very realistic and strong, unlike the boring drone of some other fics. Looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not really very good with reveiws...hm...I like the story, and chapter. More soon please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay for cuddling :D. Awesome and adorable chapter - |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cute story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, cute. I cant wait until Oliver finds out and hopefully goes berserk with jealosy. Is Raiden going to hide the relationship first? I get that he doesn't want to ruin anything with Oliver but he could still tell him he's gay without revealing his crush right? Or do you have Oliver not know because then he would make a move on Raiden? Or maybe he's not gay *sad thought* Oh well, I like Pat too. Dont answer if you dont want I just get really excited about best friend stories. Anywho, where'd your penname come from? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! Yay for more Pat time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay~ Awesome story, please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I lyke Pat. PatRaiden:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() O can't wait to read more about Pat! So far he seems to be a nice guy. Hopefully he doesn't fuck over Raiden, or vice versa. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() :D. Its really good.. like I want to read more! And I found it funny, because in my own story, I have a guy named Raiden (: You should check it out D: -poke- |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story just seems to have so much great potential. I can't wait to read more of it! Great Job! |