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I definately hate him...

Love it x3

Oh... I would be so angry if this happened to me...

Feel so sorry for him, he is dead...

LOL X3

funny X3

I have to admit, this story grabbed my attention, I'm surprised there aren't more reviews. You might want to switch it to romance instead of young adult, you'd definitely get more hits that way and it would fit better since the story falls under the M category anyway.

I like what I've read so far, her voice is clear and while there are moments that didn't flow as smoothly over all I really liked it. AND the humour is clear throughout and I like that she acknowledges when she does something dumb (like bending over to pick up the hammer)and doesn't brush it off.

Just a couple of things from the latest chapter though;

I thought she was wearing a ski mask, wouldn't he wonder why the dream her would be wearing a mask And wouldn't *she* be wondering why her in his bed would see acceptable to him even in a dream?

And how'd she end up lying on the bed? For some reason, I imagined her crouching over him to pull the phone out of his pocket, not lying down, and then as the story goes on it seems as if he just grabbed her arm, not pulled her down enough so that she's lying beside him so he can drape himself all over her.

Still, I really enjoyed it and I'd love to see where it goes.

Wow, did that seriously happen? I totally love it! I mean, seriously, I do! Great job )

ha! love the insults.. love the storyy!

updatee! lols

MORE PLEASE! hahahahaa! I love the insults they throw at one another and their little pranks. theyre so cute in a way, coz its like they say "boys are mean to girls they like".. but these two charatcers are just taking it to a whole new level. cant wait for more :D

~Francine

So, I was looking for a story to get started reading because I was so bored today and...your story was everything I was looking for! I Love the humor.

Jared's hot-Claudia needs to tap that! Haha J/K

seriously, the jared asleep scene couldnt have been any cuter!

claudia needs to stop being so stubborn and embrace the hotness!

anyway, update soon!

Hey there. Just wanted to drop a review and say that this story is kind of amazing. You're doing a GREAT job. Keep up the good work!

yours is the first story ive read on fictionpress.

I think its great.

update soon!