Reviews for The Vampire's Proposal |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story so far is great. You're an amazing writer. Can't wait to read more. :) |
![]() ![]() Well, dang it, What happens next? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really interesting so far. Id like to see her take a little longer to warm up to th idea. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting, i know shell say yess |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm, interesting idea. I- personally- am not really into vampire stories but I know that a ton of people are so you have shown that you're good at pleasing the public. On your profile you talk about being a simplistic writer- there's nothing wrong with that! (: I prefer to read from writer's that are short and sweet, get straight to the point and tell me that the grass is green. I don't want twelve metephors explaining that the grass is green- but I'm rambling. So I will tell you, that you should be using quotes instead of apostrophes. I'm also wondering why in the last line you used one of these: ~ instead of a -. But, as a new author here you seem to show potential, I wish you nothing but the best. -mea |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope she doesnt die! |
![]() ![]() ![]() its very interesting so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg this is such a unique though for a story, new chapter? today? |