Reviews for The Vampire's Proposal
Xandrea chapter 4 . 2/24/2011
This story so far is great. You're an amazing writer. Can't wait to read more. :)
Margirli13 chapter 4 . 11/28/2010
Well, dang it, What happens next?
AKlimesh chapter 4 . 6/14/2010
This is really interesting so far. Id like to see her take a little longer to warm up to th idea.
Bittersweet Lover chapter 4 . 2/15/2010
interesting, i know shell say yess
Minor Masterpiece chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Hmm, interesting idea. I- personally- am not really into vampire stories but I know that a ton of people are so you have shown that you're good at pleasing the public. On your profile you talk about being a simplistic writer- there's nothing wrong with that! (: I prefer to read from writer's that are short and sweet, get straight to the point and tell me that the grass is green. I don't want twelve metephors explaining that the grass is green- but I'm rambling.

So I will tell you, that you should be using quotes instead of apostrophes. I'm also wondering why in the last line you used one of these: ~ instead of a -.

But, as a new author here you seem to show potential, I wish you nothing but the best.

-mea
Bittersweet Lover chapter 2 . 2/6/2010
I hope she doesnt die!
starchild8790 chapter 2 . 2/6/2010
its very interesting so far
Bittersweet Lover chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
omg this is such a unique though for a story, new chapter? today?