Reviews for I want you to make noise like a cymbal
Ondine's Curse chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
i like the moth bit.

made me smile, heh.
for shame chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
i like the way you write.

halting and crazy,

kind of like a crack addict.

but better.
dropping dew chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Really interesting way of writing your poem. I felt myself becoming engaged in the writing which was kind of nice for a change. I really liked the part about being moths and not b.u.t.t.e.r.f.l.i.e.s. It was cool.