Reviews for msn haikus
Manuel Fajar chapter 3 . 2/3/2010
moon’s glow held heart’s sway

pulling high, then low our love

cleansing black sand shores
Manuel Fajar chapter 2 . 2/3/2010
dappled red and brown

still our skin and blood remains

haunting paths of rock
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
behind veiled eyelids

falling stars—veined nebulas

seal heart's dreams in flight
sealednectar chapter 5 . 2/3/2010
Like it! Made me smile. It was cute. Well done. Keep writing.


sealednectar chapter 4 . 2/3/2010
Oh sad. The speaker has given up. Chasing someone is hard work, perserverance is key.
sealednectar chapter 3 . 2/3/2010
Wonderful! Really beautiful imagery, metaphor and personification. Good work.
sealednectar chapter 2 . 2/3/2010
This is a really interesting haiku. Makes me think.

Well done.
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