|Reviews for msn haikus|
| Manuel Fajar chapter 3 . 2/3/2010
moon’s glow held heart’s sway
pulling high, then low our love
cleansing black sand shores
| Manuel Fajar chapter 2 . 2/3/2010
dappled red and brown
still our skin and blood remains
haunting paths of rock
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
behind veiled eyelids
falling stars—veined nebulas
seal heart's dreams in flight
| sealednectar chapter 5 . 2/3/2010
Like it! Made me smile. It was cute. Well done. Keep writing.
| sealednectar chapter 4 . 2/3/2010
Oh sad. The speaker has given up. Chasing someone is hard work, perserverance is key.
| sealednectar chapter 3 . 2/3/2010
Wonderful! Really beautiful imagery, metaphor and personification. Good work.
| sealednectar chapter 2 . 2/3/2010
This is a really interesting haiku. Makes me think.