Reviews for Jazz Age Haiku
Icyfire4w5 chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
Frankly speaking, I don't really know much about the Jazz Age, so I'm wiki-ing it now... Wow, I bet that life during the Jazz Age must have been really glamorous, filled with parties and lots of fun. Sadly, the Great Depression has killed off the Jazz Age, and your last line hints that the Jazz Age won't last forever anyway.
Humming LadyBug chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
These were amazing. I loved haiku like these because you don't define the obvious. You write them in a way that gets readers thinking. I can't pick a favorite. They're all good. Well done.
Wai-Jing Waraugh chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
I like how you used haiku to describe a non-typical subject for this poetic form - nice to see something other than the usual nature/emotion/angst themes that tend to crop up. Very well done - the frankness of each 'voice' in the narratives really suits the brevity of haiku.

Suffice to say: well done!
Tapioooca chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
I definitely thought of The Great Gatsby.

All five of these are incredible. Keep on being awesome! :)

- Tapioca
nickyO chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
Great imagery and emotion. Really strong.