Reviews for Inhibitions
Isca chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
The imagery in this piece wasn't over-done; it was simple, and I think that worked with this bar-scene really well. The last line, "I'm here to get fucked up," is so honest; the speaker doesn't even care what happens to her, she just wants a release from life. I think that people will be able to relate to this story easily. Keep up the good work.