|Reviews for Lipstick smiles|
| Archia chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
I like this because it's quite true. i like the line 'run rabbit run, i'm not sure why though.
| Joseph Messam chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
OMG lauren WTF are u on. crack or heroin. that poem was random and wats wiv the rabbit fing.
| Amai Dolciumi chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
I love this part:
"The more you say, the less they hear,
The more you scream, the less they care,
The more you cry, the more they laugh,"
It's so true. ):
There were a few times when you used the wrong "you're."
But, yeah, it's amazing how evil people can get. I think we all need to be reminded of that so we learn to think carefully about what we're doing. So it's good people recognize it and can turn it into art.
(And, of course, I'm also not trying to elevate myself. XD)