Reviews for Simile
Isca chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
My favourite similes were: "It’s like stitches dissolving before the scar heals" and "It's like lying to yourself." Both of these lines were very vivid and powerful.
Broken Winged Bird chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
I actually really like this. I can relate to it, because I've felt like this so much before. I think it's very well written. And I like the use of 'you' instead of 'I'. I think it makes it easier for the reader to connect to what you're writing too, and not just the writer alone.