|Reviews for months of love|
| Faithless Juliet chapter 3 . 2/5/2010
Again the use of vanilla twilight, nice...
This one had a better boundry to it, I think of all three this one would be my favorite.
| Faithless Juliet chapter 2 . 2/5/2010
I don't know, I felt like something was missing in this one, as with the last piece, it starts off good, and I really liked the line about the sweat on their hands, it was an unusual yet magical statement.
Nearing the end it just kind of fell apart for me.
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
I really liked where you were going toward the beginning of this piece, but toward the end I felt that it got a bit cliched. Nice job overall though, keep up the good work.
| Manuel Fajar chapter 3 . 2/4/2010
after an epoch
North Pole flips its direction
Southern Cross remains
| Manuel Fajar chapter 2 . 2/4/2010
love’s gossamers & tendrils
fastens them as One
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
weave light threads through blind souls