Reviews for months of love
Faithless Juliet chapter 3 . 2/5/2010
Again the use of vanilla twilight, nice...

This one had a better boundry to it, I think of all three this one would be my favorite.

Juliet.
Faithless Juliet chapter 2 . 2/5/2010
I don't know, I felt like something was missing in this one, as with the last piece, it starts off good, and I really liked the line about the sweat on their hands, it was an unusual yet magical statement.

Nearing the end it just kind of fell apart for me.

Juliet.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
I really liked where you were going toward the beginning of this piece, but toward the end I felt that it got a bit cliched. Nice job overall though, keep up the good work.

Much love,

Juliet.
Manuel Fajar chapter 3 . 2/4/2010
after an epoch

North Pole flips its direction

Southern Cross remains
Manuel Fajar chapter 2 . 2/4/2010
atom—molecule

love’s gossamers & tendrils

fastens them as One
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
love's conversations

weave light threads through blind souls

binding abysms