Reviews for Sleepwalking
marie alexandria chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
i like how you patterned this so that each part started with the command, "ready, set, go". it definitely gave it that authoritative feel, as though big brother was over your shoulder. i don't quite understand the "we can save, but we'll kill us" line, but the rest flows smoothly and beautifully. nice work.
x-jean-marie-x chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
I like this. My favourite lines were "Maybe we can beat the sunset, and escape what we've become," just really struck me. Did notice one typo, livind instead of living. Good meaning too.