Reviews for Life
Sasue chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
YES. time just flies by doesn't it? \ This poem was pretty good.
Genzetsubou chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
I liked the last metaphor about life being a battle that must be fought. In my personal opinion, I think you should have continued on with that concept, described the "fight" in the "battle" of life. Besides that, it was good.