Reviews for There Goes My Life
stargirl7890 chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
kay, i really like your story, like a lot. here's a tip though: don't repeat the 'same' word over and over . i dont know i was reading it and it was buggin me ... how you kept saying 'baby' all the time. anyway, keep it up. keep writing good stories ; P look forward to reading more of them ( :
firestar267 chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
I thought this was a great introduction and that I cant wait to see what comes next :)
plumblossom chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
I like that Dakota's child is with a friend and not some evil strumpet! (too often in slash stories with a child there's an evil mommy in the background)