Reviews for Balloons
Long Island Iced Tea chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
It made me think of a model just starting out on a supposedly very glam career for some reason... very beautifully written.
RipplingEbbulience chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
You have a really good streak toward poetry...

Keep writing...

HPRK08 chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
Brilliant, this!

I like the line "She’s no stranger to defeat and disgrace. She falters every time."

RuhFuh chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
Loads of colours. Real nice. D

Liked the line "Like rainbow bullets on a bloodless battlefield" .

Keep going!