|Reviews for I|
| Icestormize chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
This is so beautiful.
| 3M2R chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
Man... I read this because of the title. I have a poem with exactly the same title...
This is so... very... true...
I sob in the dark
too weak to ask for help,
withering all around
choked to even yelp!
It grabbed me instantly... Because this speaks of... The past I wish not to remember, the past that just keeps haunting, and the past that leaves me in the lurch, dominated by fear, suppressed by inhibitions.
| Lyra Pocaterra chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Beautiful poem! I specially love the last four lines "I live into the day, Waiting for my new wings to grow, Because nothing lasts forever, Someday or other it has to go", reminds me of a butterfly.
The only minor mistake is in "I sob in the dark,To weak to ask for help" where I think you meant to write "TOO weak" intead of "To weak", but its a great poem notheless!
| SincerelyInspired chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Wow, YOur poems are amazing. I love this one! your writing is awesome!
| themanicurist chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
you asked for someone to read this... so i did.
it's good. the formatting is a pain here on fictionpress, so i know you can't help that. i feel more like giving you advice than reviewing. is that so strange? it's true: nothing lasts forever. but life is long and we have many opportunities as human beings. don't be afraid.