|Reviews for Suspicion|
| waterlilies52 chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
oh snap, this was spooky. I'm glad I'm not Alex.
| violinrunner chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Good grief! You're writing so fast I can hardly keep up!
Not that I mind. I always enjoy your work.
I really like this story. Truth be told, I didn't see the choppy dialogue you mentioned in the note at the end. But I like the style you used here. Present tense is tough to make convincing, but you pulled it off. I also like the fact that Hecate/Joyce's husband doesn't know she's evil. When I read "Being Evil Isn't Easy," I figure her husband knew what was going on and just went with it.
So, what is Joyce, anyway? Does she use witchcraft to stay young, or is she not human? Also, how does she hide from the world in general that she never ages. Obviously her husband suspects, but even if she offs him and changes her identity, does she never ever run into people she knew in her previous life?
| Narq chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
This is a powerful story
I seriously got goosebumps reading it.
You captured hte emotions quite well. The choppy English didn't annoy me at all and it conveyed, quite nicely, that he was worked up. I hope she doesn't kill him.