Hey! This is good. No actually it's more than good.

I really like the way its been written, it's vague but it works, and I like it :)

I'm sad how he (I'm guessing that it's a he) didn't tell her he loved her. I think they would have been perfect together.

They both saw the truth about the Creature and they deserved to be happy.

So you say that this is based on real life? What exactly happened to you? (that is only if you don't mind me asking...?)

I really enjoyed this (which is probably not what you we're looking for but...).

I think I may go and see your other work - I haven't looked at your page in a long, long time.

Annie