Reviews for Teacher's Pet
Guest chapter 4 . 7/5/2024
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zagato chapter 4 . 1/1/2019
This is great, kindly update, thank you!
IsntItFunny chapter 4 . 10/22/2017
Things were just being set up, too! What a shame this story has not been continued. It has potential.
IsntItFunny chapter 1 . 10/22/2017
I only just read the first chapter and really enjoyed it... Then I saw there were only four chapters, this story has not been updated in six years, checked the reviews and realized that this story is incomplete.

Shame!

This was a very good first chapter. There was a clear introduction to the main characters, the setting and the plot. The only thing I have to complain about (other than this story being incomplete), is the incorrect use of quotation marks - or lackthereof. I would have preferred to see full quotation marks used and proper comma usage when cutting off the dialogue to insert description.

I hope you have continued writing elsewhere!

:)
Guest chapter 4 . 8/3/2015
Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?
S.Peridot chapter 4 . 7/21/2014
Really enjoyed reading this. So there's no hope of getting an update ? :(

Sarah
Hina chapter 4 . 7/12/2014
I really like the story so far and it would be wonderful if you'd update and finish the story...
Guest chapter 4 . 5/19/2014
This is really good is there a particular reason u aren't finishing it?
Guest chapter 4 . 2/18/2014
Are you ever planning to finish this story?
Nytes chapter 4 . 1/8/2014
Wonderful story i really hope you keep going with it!
Cairi-Chesh chapter 4 . 4/7/2013
Post another chapter! I'm eager for the next chapters!
AbbeyXD chapter 4 . 11/27/2012
This is a really good story! Hopefully you'll finish it and soon! :)
kiwi8fruit chapter 4 . 11/8/2012
you said updates and then didn't for 3 years almost?
R. Ficst chapter 4 . 10/28/2012
I'm a little worried since I can see this was last updated in 2010, but do you plan to continue with the story? I really hope you do. Please message me back if you can, so I can know either way.

I do hope he doesn't kill Finn. I hope their friendship can overcome the unreasoning side of their wolves. Any chance Finn left to give Hunter a chance to cool off, and plans to call him to apologize? If he clearly backs off pursuing El, compliments Hunter for his good choice, and apologizes for not knowing, I could see him getting out of this alive. I mean, it would actually tarnish Hunter's character with me pretty badly if he actually kills his friend for this reason. I get the instant anger and everything, and that sort of possessiveness has its cool side, but he wouldn't be a very good person, or even a strong alpha if he couldn't handle a little accident like that.
MamaBear19 chapter 4 . 12/12/2011
it's a very good book, great story line, can't wait to read the rest, you have quite the talent
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