Reviews for Lovechild Inamorata
nickyO chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
lol at your description of how you came up with the poem. But "My Gods" I liked it. ;)
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
It reminded me of a recipe sorta like how to create a lovechild inamorata. It's a very beautiful and complex recipe.
KCanna chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
I can feel the beat for this! And I can see the technicolor! Oh my gosh, I feel the rush! I like the

"Oh the wind!

Oh the wind!

Little girl,

yes the wind!" part.

I also like the line, "let the nigh make love to the day." The Martians love it too. Oh, yes they do. You know exactly what I mean.

Overall, nice job. Love the lack of pattern.