Gasp! I loved that! Maybe with a bit more organization of ideas in a setup the flows right into the next subject, this will be stage-ready material. I liked it a lot. I can see how the person looks/sounds/carries themselves. I can tell you're in debate. I'm in theatre. We have similar tastes in writing and monologues. I'm glad you decided to post this, I think it's a good edition to the site.

Sophie :3