|Reviews for 2 January 2010 Mitch|
| your fish chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
my gosh i love this... i really like the last stanza because of the formatting and the feeling of almost either submision to the thought of that he might not be able to put you back together or the panic in the worry that he wont be able to. also the line "my brain won't stop making kyrics, making lines" i love the feel with this line.
though maybe i'm reading too much into this... either way i like it. )