Reviews for Unattainable
4tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
I like the opening line. it's awesome. what's going on?
your fish chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
i love this... the rhythem is amaizng... the flow quite poetic... i love it...

but i'm sorry for the pain.
Isca chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
"You are the unattainable-the broken dream." I love this opening line; it's so heart-wrenching and angsty.
givinggg7 chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
Exactly how I feel, very lovely poem!