Reviews for I Thought
Rockin-Ferrett chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
Amazing, very honest. :)
sunshineofyourlife chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
Beautiful. Whether we know it or not, we all mold ourselves around the people we're with at the time.

4tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
maybe they're just crazy. you okay?
your fishy chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
my god... i'm at a loss for words, i love this.i'm so sorry but this is just so... beautifuly tragic (maybe is what i'm looking for)

i love you anyway you are, and always will.

i cant, idk, i cant grasp the words i want to use. i just want to hug you and tell you what an amazing person you are. your're remarkable anyway you wish to be.

You're not fat.

I still see/feel/sense your pain.

and i've always loved listening to you. always.
Isca chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
"I’m up past my bed time / trying to break my bones open /

remembering the echoes." This is brilliant. "Trying to break my bones open", in particular, is truly a fantastic line.
nickyO chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
There's a lot of control in this poem that voices pain. The writing is on target.

I am surprised that you placed it in the Friendship cat.

Is it because the speaker of the poem is becoming his or her own friend, taking charge of their own feelings, instead of trying to please others? Hope so. It's a good poem.