Interesting story. It has a unique frame of reference. And I rather like the science involved in the story. While I am not a physicist, I am aware of some of the basics of the big bang theory, and the process behind energy to matter.

i'm curious about the nature of the narator, and about his reliability. how much is 'fact' in this story, and how much was his interpretation of 'truth', and how truthful he would be to his scribe. Such narators make for interesting stories since they have to be second guessed and analyzed.

Regardless I rather enjoyed this story so far.