|Reviews for I Am|
| wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
This is a good one xD And for the record I would never stereotype Mexicans as bean eaters! I've always thought they eat wraps all day.
"Oh I am an writer so I must be an a loner freak
Let me tell you that's just incidental"
Those were my favourite lines xD
I love your ability to mock yourself as well as others XD
| seagreen03 chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
how do you write like that? an awesome poem that i dont know how to describe because i m totally dumbstruck and a bit envious of u (Lol)
| Happy to be Mad chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
-Laugh- This piece is awesome.
| Typing Typhoon chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
*I will never understand why teens are so angsty
Can’t you see that life is too short?
And there you are wasting your precious life
Trying to be politically correct and all that gay stuff*
Nice, no matter how many times I read that segment I wind up laughing to myself.
| Garrett Harbinger chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
I liked that alot. After your reviews of my own work i decided to read some of yours. I love the sacrasm youve layered this peice with! My favorite line is about being a writer, you must be a loner. I have tried and tried to explain to myself and others how untrue that is! But I guess i never tried the simple direct sarcastic aproach. KUDOS!
| Reason-Flower chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
Well, I'd say that political correctness has its merits, but otherwise, a decent poem. There were a couple spelling mistakes, but they didn't get in the way of understanding it. I probably would have added something about how you should just take each person as they come, and if they fit the stereotype, then whatever. However, you're the writer. The rhythm was good, and it SOUNDED like a poem, but the language failed to grab me as much as it could have, though that's partly because I like lots of complexity, and more detail would be nice. All in all, certainly not the best poem I've ever seen, but I've seen plenty worse, too. It's acceptable (you get C/C). Keep it up.
| 55252 chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
veryy good! ;0