Reviews for there's a fine line |
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![]() ![]() ![]() existence will be just one lungful of air away - That struck me as very desperate, and your tone is so honest yet complex in a way that shines through its simplicity, which really doesn't make sense but it does. I'd go without the bold and choose italics, but that's just me. This is a very delicate work, and I adored every line, thank you for writing and sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So true. When you're in love, time ceases to exist. Beautiful poem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i haven't read your poetry in so long. i've missed it. |