I love the idea. I really think you should take this a little farther. Maybe have more of a back story on both Edmond and the Narrator.

All in all, a very original idea. I love it! ;D

Absolutely ingenious! Very clever and original.

like the conversation between the two

I came across your profile by complete accident, but I had to leave a review. This was hilarious. I never really thought about how annoying narrators can be. Could you imagine having on in real life, well, maybe we do... Hmm. Anyway. I like the Captain Pansy line. I really appreciate the fact that you didn't use any harsh language to get your point across.

Anyway, this was great and truth be told, that narrator probably did need to be fired...

I liked that... but maybe for should bold the words when the narrator it talking, to make it more clear.

all in all, it was a good idea.

:)

Haha! That's funny, Kentucky Fried Parasite recommended this. I'm his sarcastic friend... Mind you, if I were able to narrarate his life, I would've taken the same route.

I'm rambling on a bit aren't I? I'll cut to the chase.

Cool fic, Kentucky's rght, you should definitely update it.

Haha, that is truly brilliant, a clever idea can't believe noone has tried this before.

I guess it's really two parts of Edmonds mind, the pessimist and the angsty teen. I like how the two cut each other off, very funny!

Keep Writing :)

haha

Hah, that's great. I have a cynical friend who fits the narrators bill perfectly. The fic has potential, don't leave it as a one shot.

XD