|Reviews for stormcloud|
| mr mahler chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
nice little number,
best lines for me personaly in your poem;
''illuminating the bottom of a stormcloud
that's been hanging around for days.
it's like a splash of hope
against the recently black background''
like your wordplay...and topic
see what you think to my work if you would you may like dislike?