Wow. The imagery is amazing. You easily draw the image of a plush-green feild and lovely blue skies and a boy playing in the feild.

I read many stories with crows (it's all because of -_-) but I find this one my favorite. It's so creepy and beautiful at the same time. Plus you didn't need lots of bottles of ketchup (almost non) to make us scared.

Great job~

This was vivid, intriguing and damn creepy. Brilliant writing and descriptions, however your tense switches from past to present.