Reviews for I want to belong
Deeps chapter 5 . 2/15/2010
The story is very good. And I hope your schedule doesn't keep you from continuing!. Please update the next chapter soon. I can't wait to read it.
Amore0214 chapter 5 . 2/15/2010
I love it
jeepers09 chapter 5 . 2/15/2010
This story is very good so far. Makes me want to read more and more. I hope your schedule doesn't keep you from continuing!
HelgaBertoni chapter 5 . 2/15/2010
Very well written, can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon!
Amore0214 chapter 4 . 2/14/2010
I love it please continue!
HelgaBertoni chapter 4 . 2/13/2010
Love the story so far, update soon!
Deeps chapter 4 . 2/13/2010
good storyline and i cant wait to read next chapter. please post it soon.
MiscellaneousMe chapter 3 . 2/12/2010
Hmm your plot seems interesting so far. I'm curious to see where this is headed.
BRMR chapter 3 . 2/12/2010
I'm really interested to see where you go with this!

...But I'd like to make a suggestion if I may. I noticed that you wrote 'felled' alot, and while it is a word, you're using it in the wrong context. In the sense that your writing, I think you meant to write 'felt' not 'felled'. It's just a suggestion but it really takes away from your writing when you have mispelled words. I hope you don't take my constructive critiscism the wrong way. :)
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