wow! you are doing a fantastic job with this story! i'm wondering when mia is going to find the hidden room behind her vanity ; ) lol anyways it is very well written! update soon

This was a nice update. I don't have too much to say so I guess I will just wait.

Wow. This is some solid stuff! I like the whole background story and how it weaves with the house and the characters creating a classic ghost story with a dark twist. This is good, and I am in suspense. I can't wait to check out some more of your work.

I like this, kind of creepy and original. It reminds me of stories I read in my early teens. I still love R. and Darlene McDaniel. I know weird, but I do. You have a lot of potential and I'm going to definately keep this on my list of stories to look for an update. :)