Oh! That pot roast story was so nasty and scary. You do have a talent!

Those were great. The pot roast one was particularly... creepy. Just the way I like it. Keep up the great stories!

wow these are some pretty good short shortstories! lol very creepy, and good reads that leave alot to the imagination haha update soon

Cheddar's a cannibal! *maniacal grin* I liked these three too. Especially "A Perfect Fit". Keep writing these awesome stories!

Love it! Just what I want in a horror story; quick, suspenseful, and creepy. Thanks for the fun read. I wouldn't mind reading more.

Those were excellent horror stories, and nicely written for their shortness. One suggestion:

The "H, h" at the beginning of The Nocturnal Horror was not really necessary. It was not bad or anything, but you could just say that she was breathing heavily.

Great stories, though!

Oh, good stories. Short, yet satisfyingly creepy.

Two suggestions:

"She had wandered into the Bogerby Swamp, a marsh on the outskirts of town, on dare and had never been seen again."

There should be an "a" before dare.

"The underside of her eyes was ringed with dark circles."

I think it would sound better if it was: "The undersides of her eyes were ringed with dark circles."

Otherwise, these stories were perfect. .

.thinking

Interesting! I think I like Splash of Red the best *nod nod* I think that's because it just drops off and leaves the ending to the imagination. You can just see her looking up...yep! I like that one the best 'o keep writing!