Reviews for Apocalypse
she left ringing in his head chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
at first it seemed like it was just dragging on and on, but once you got to the ending of it, everything seemed to fit together perfectly, great job.
4tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
something always gets in the way; I know how that feels. your boyfriend giving you problems?
Isca chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
"I want to cry until I can’t fucking breathe, so make me scream until my lungs bleed." This opening line is so intense. Wow. The pain here is quite hard-hitting.
sunshineofyourlife chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
wow, this is quite intense. i like the imagery of ripping yourself apart. i like the ending, but i think you could definitely add more before in comes.

this is wonderful.

-sunshine